Dealing with returned manuscripts

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Singapore Med J 2009; 50(11): 1050-1053
Dealing with returned manuscripts

Peh WCG, Ng KH
Correspondence: Prof Wilfred CG Peh, smj.editor@sma.org.sg

ABSTRACT 
It is useful for authors to learn to deal with returned manuscripts with a rejection decision or a request for revision. Common reasons for rejection include contents outside the scope of the journal or inappropriate for the journal, incomplete submission, poor methodology, faulty experimental design, major flaws in the interpretation of results, extremely poor writing, and duplicated or plagiarised work. Authors should use the editor’s and reviewers’ comments to improve their manuscripts and resubmit elsewhere. Common reasons for revision requests include minor faults in the methodology, minor inaccuracies in data, inconsistencies among different sections of the manuscript, faulty deductions, data that do not support the conclusions, excessive data or text, poor or excessive illustrations, and poor but salvageable writing. A request for revision should be viewed positively, as it means that there is a possibility that the manuscript may still be potentially publishable, provided that all the editor’s and reviewers’ comments are addressed. 

Keywords: manuscript rejection, manuscript revision, manuscript submission, medical writing, returned manuscript, scientific paper 
Singapore Med J 2009; 50(11): 1050-1053

Nurturing young writers: sustaining quality, not quantity

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Singapore Med J 2009; 50(11): 1044-1047
Nurturing young writers: sustaining quality, not quantity

Looi LM
Correspondence: Prof Looi Lai Meng, looilm@ummc.edu.my 

ABSTRACT 
The exponential growth in scientific journals and advent of the electronic era have led to such information overload that the sustainability of credible and quality publications is more urgent than ever. Editors and academics who commit themselves to nurturing young writers need to reaffirm their focus on quality rather  than quantity of papers. Bearing in mind that publications should firstly be founded on good science, there are several approaches in helping the uninitiated develop and hone writing skills. Academic journals faithfully publish instructions to guide potential authors on the preparation and submission of manuscripts. For those with a gift for writing, this may suffice to start them soaring in their writing career. Others find the hands-on approach of writing workshops more effective in clarifying the rules of the writing game and dispelling the fear of writing. Workshops are good at demonstrating the basics, but the forging of a good writer is a long process in which a mentor can play an invaluable role. A nurturing mentormentee relationship should not be a stifling one, but one that leads, grows and finally liberates an independent writer. It is inevitable that the nature of scientific publications will change over time. Nonetheless, the sustainability of quality journals will remain linked to the continual generation of writers who uphold scientific truth and good writing values. 

Keywords: authorship, medical mentors, medical writing, scientific writing, writing workshops 

Singapore declaration on equitable access to health information in the Western Pacific Region

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Singapore Med J 2009; 50(11): 1043
Singapore declaration on equitable access to health information in the Western Pacific Region

Viper bite causing an isolated lower motor neuron-type of facial palsy

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Singapore Med J 2009; 50(10): e368-e370
Viper bite causing an isolated lower motor neuron-type of facial palsy

Baig WW, Prabhu AR, Kumar C
Correspondence: Dr Waqas Wahid Baig, drwaqaswahid@gmail.com

ABSTRACT
We describe an unusual case of viper (Daboia russelii) bite in a 48-year-old man from the state of Karnataka in southern India. He presented in a hypotensive state with a left lower motor neuron-type of facial palsy, necrosis at the site of the bite and acute renal failure. His laboratory parameters revealed renal failure and deranged coagulation parameters. He was treated with intravenous antibiotics and polyvalent antiserum venom, and dialysed in view of the renal failure. His renal function and coagulation abnormalities improved, and the facial palsy recovered with the treatment. The snake bite located away from the face, the facial palsy occurring a few hours after the venom injection and the rapid recovery following antivenin administration, support that the palsy was a direct result of systemic envenomation. To the best of our knowledge, an isolated lower motor neuron-type of facial palsy as a manifestation of systemic toxicity of a viper bite, has not been previously reported.

Keywords: anti-snake venom, facial palsy, renal failure, snake envenomation, viper bite
Singapore Med J 2009; 50(10): e368-e370

Molybdenum cofactor deficiency in a Malaysian child

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Singapore Med J 2009; 50(10): e365-e367
Molybdenum cofactor deficiency in a Malaysian child

Ngu LH, Afroze B, Chen BC, Affandi D, Zabedah MY
Correspondence: Dr Ngu Lock Hock, ngulh@hotmail.com

ABSTRACT
Molybdenum cofactor deficiency is a rare autosomal recessive disorder with devastating neurological manifestations, characterised by neonatal-onset encephalopathy mimicking hypoxic-ischaemic insult, intractable seizure, and feeding and respiratory difficulties. It is often fatal in the early life. We report an affected 8-year-old boy, who has presented with severe neurological manifestations since birth, but without clinically-significant seizure. Molybdenum cofactor deficiency must be included in the differential diagnosis of patients presenting with unexplained encephalopathy in the newborn period, and whose neuroimaging findings are consistent with hypoxic ischaemic encephalopathy. The classic laboratory hallmark of this disorder is low serum uric acid, positive urine sulphite dipstick test, and elevated urinary S-sulphocysteine, hypoxanthine and xanthine. 

Keywords: molybdenum cofactor deficiency, S-sulphocysteine, uric acid, urine sulphite
Singapore Med J 2009; 50(10): e365-e367

Symptomatic anaemia 17 years after double valve replacement

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Singapore Med J 2009; 50(10): e362-e364
Symptomatic anaemia 17 years after double valve replacement

Wong MH, Chee KH, Azman W 
Correspondence: Dr Wong Mun Hoe, drwongmh@gmail.com

ABSTRACT
A 40-year-old Malay woman presented with increasing lethargy, palpitation and shortness of breath, 17 years after a mitral and aortic valve replacement. A Starr Edwards prosthetic valve replaced the mitral valve, and a Bjork-Shiley prosthetic valve replaced the aortic valve. Biochemical parameters demonstrated intravascular haemolysis, as evidenced by haemoglobin 7.8 g/dL, reticulocyte count 8.4%, lactate dehydrogenase 2,057 IU/L and low haptoglobulin levels (less than 6 mg/dL). Transoesophageal echocardiography revealed a paravalvular leakage over the mitral valve. The haemoglobin levels remained persistently low despite frequent blood transfusion. She successfully underwent a second mitral valve replacement. Her anaemia resolved A subsequently.

Keywords: anaemia, haemolysis, haemolytic anaemia, paravalvular leakage, prosthetic valve
Singapore Med J 2009; 50(10): e362-e364

"Fishing for lines": removal of endovascular catheters from the cardiovascular system

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Singapore Med J 2009; 50(10): e358-e361
"Fishing for lines": removal of endovascular catheters from the cardiovascular system

Wong AR, Suhaimi H, Ridzuan MAR, Rizal MMZ, Saedah A 
Correspondence: Dr Abdul Rahim Wong, rahim@kck.usm.my

ABSTRACT
We present two infants whose endovascular lines were accidentally cut or fractured, and had to be retrieved via transcatheter means in the cardiac catheterisation laboratory. The first case was a two-month-old infant with transposition of the great arteries, requiring an emergency balloon atrial septostomy. An indwelling vascular catheter that was placed in the right femoral vein was accidentally cut and had migrated into the inferior vena cava, before being retrieved. The second case was a one-week-old neonate who presented with pneumonia at birth, and had a long intravenous catheter placed in the left saphenous vein, which became fractured, and subsequently migrated into the heart. This case presented as a pulmonary embolus with haemodynamic instability, as the catheter had partially obstructed the right ventricular outflow tract. This was later retrieved via transcatheter means.

Keywords: endovascular catheter complications, endovascular catheter removal, indwelling venous catheters, snare, transcatheter retrieval
Singapore Med J 2009; 50(10): e358-e361

Loeys-Dietz syndrome: a Marfan-like syndrome associated with aggressive vasculopathy

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Singapore Med J 2009; 50(10): e353-e357
Loeys-Dietz syndrome: a Marfan-like syndrome associated with aggressive vasculopathy

Choo JTL, Tan TH, Lai AHM, Wong KY 
Correspondence: Dr Jonathan Choo Tze Liang, chooseml@yahoo.com.sg

ABSTRACT
Loeys-Dietz syndrome is a recently-characterised genetic disorder with an autosomal dominant inheritance due to mutations in the transforming growth factor beta-receptor Type 1 or Type 2 genes. We present a Chinese female neonate with genetically-confirmed Loeys-Dietz syndrome, cleft palate, hypertelorism, and an early dilatation of the aortic root and ascending aorta. This syndrome is associated with an aggressive arteriopathy, with an increased risk of dissection and rupture. Early diagnosis, close monitoring and early surgery may prolong the life in affected individuals. Losartan is an emerging therapy that may help slow down the rate of arterial dilatation. 

Keywords: aortic aneurysm, Loeys-Dietz syndrome, losartan, Marfan syndrome, transforming growth factor beta 
Singapore Med J 2009; 50(10): e353-e357

Pulmonary artery aneurysm associated with severe degenerative aortic stenosis

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Singapore Med J 2009; 50(10): e350-e352
Pulmonary artery aneurysm associated with severe degenerative aortic stenosis

Ling PKH
Correspondence: Dr Paul Ling Kah Hing, paul.ling@med.monash.edu.my

ABSTRACT
We report a pulmonary artery (PA) aneurysm associated with severe aortic stenosis and an aortic root dilatation occurring in a 59-year-old woman who presented with dyspnoea and chest pain. PA aneurysms are rare, and there are no definitive guidelines on its management. There are contentious opinions on whether such aneurysms should be managed conservatively or surgically. Our patient had associated aortic stenosis and underwent a successful aortic valve replacement and PA aneurysm repair. This case illustrates that concomitant PA repair with other cardiothoracic surgery can be performed safely, even in patients with moderate surgical risks. We also discuss the natural history, prognosis and management of PA aneurysms.


Keywords: aortic stenosis, aortic valve replacement, pulmonary artery aneurysm
Singapore Med J 2009; 50(10): e350-e352